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30 Days of Demons – Day 15 – Miscellany

194206_res4_MaleAngel1Don’t forget to comment on yesterday’s post for a chance to win a signed copy of Angel with Attitude. I’ll be drawing a winner tonight at 9:00 p.m. EST!

Today’s post is going to be a bit random and not all about demons.

First, some good news: Yesterday I got the call(s) that I am a double finalist in the National Readers Choice Awards for Paranormal Romance – Tall, Dark & Fangsome, and Young Adult – Demon Princess: Reign or Shine! A very nice way to end the week! Thanks to OKRWA for hosting this contest every year!

I very recently finished two big project starting with the second book in my Nightshade duology. This book is scheduled for release July 2011 and should have a final title soon. I also finished my editorial revisions on Touch and Go, my November 2010 Blaze.

Now that I’ve rested for a few days (read: fallen into a temporary coma), I’m ready to start my next project, which is a Nightshade novella that will fall time-wise and release-wise in between the two books (I’m personally calling it Nightshade #1.5). Since I just worked on book #2 I’m feeling fairly confident that I can fall back into the same world for another 100 pages’ worth.

I’m pretty excited about this project since I know, thanks to the very popular lead on this antho — Lora Leigh — that it will be read by a wide variety of people who’ve never taste-tested my work before. Which means I need to hit several things with this story to give a good overview of what my writing offers — this story is on the darker and sexier side of my writing, but I also want to inject it with enough (appropriate) humor that it blends well with my other stuff. Enough romance, enough action, enough thrills, enough dialogue. And a few twists. And I want it to stand alone as much as possible. Sure! No problem!! *sweats*

So that’s where I’m at in my writing world.

DEMONS OF PAST WRITING….. (had to connect it to my theme this month somehow, didn’t I?)

I wanted to share something I found in my cluttered apartment. While trying to declutter this week, I happened upon a folder filled with early writings of mine from when I was about eighteen years old. I seem to recall being a very good writer back in the beginning.

This, however, is not the case. And I have the proof!

I want to share a snippet of my very early work. While I will never claim to be a super talented fantstic author now (although I do think I spin a decent tale), I have definitely improved since this. I see A LOT of writing when I judge contests that looks a lot like this, so my point is….. improvement is possible. Sometimes your writing just needs time and practice to improve.

Bottom line? This sucks. But I’ve gotten better. So if I can do it, so can anyone else!

Title: THE TRAPPER (a charming, romantic tale about a journalist who is sent to Alaska to do a story on fur trapping and inexplicably falls for one of the fur trappers, but realizes that Fur Is Wrong! and compels him to change his animal cruelty ways through their sweet, sweet lovin’.)

She slowly walked away from the office. Her mind spun from all the over working she had been doing lately as she took the familiar elevator down to the lower level where her car was parked.

After walking up to her brand new sportscar, she ran her hand across its smooth, flawless surface and smiled. The week was over and she could go home and sleep the weekend away. She searched in her pockets for her car key, no sign of them. Placing everything she was holding in her arms on the hood of her car, she opened her purse, although some call it her “Life”, everything in it but the kitchen sink as her mother used to tell her. The key had somehow found its way to the very bottom of her purse.

(ARE YOU ON THE EDGE OF YOUR SEAT YET??)

She shoved everything back into the bag and proceeded to open the door. After all the trouble of finding the key, the moment she swung her already thin thigh into the car, she decided to walk for the exercise. She’d worry about her car later.

Away she went. The streets of New York City on a Friday afternoon always invigorated her. She had grown up in this neighborhood and her knowledge of self defense kept her mind at ease about all the horrible things that have been happening to women, not to mention men, these days.

(FYI, STARTING A NOVEL WITH YOUR MAIN CHARACTER “THINKING ABOUT HER LIFE” IS NEVER, NEVER A GOOD THING)

But, she refused to think about anything like that. This weekend was going to be perfect, with just the right mix of social and private activities.

(LET’S SKIP FORWARD TO A DIALOGUE SCENE. I FEEL MY DIALOGUE NOW IS ONE OF MY BIGGEST STRENGTHS. LET’S SEE HOW IT WAS 21 YEARS AGO, SHALL WE?)

“Daddy! I didn’t know you were back from your business trip. Why didn’t you come into the office? Everything is so hectic around there without you.”

“Now, now Rosie, Don’t you think that you’re getting a little old to keep calling me “Daddy”?”

Rosanna stared at him affectionately. “I’ll never be too old to call you Daddy. Maybe the day you stop calling me Rosie.”

“That name was your Grandmother’s, so don’t put it down, smart Alec.” He steered her into a little cafe they were standing beside. A restaurant that business dealings took place in, engagements were met and people responded to marriage proposals. Rosanna remembered the first time her father brought her there, way back when she first got excepted (sic) into the best journalism school in the country. Just because her father owned the magazine she worked for doesn’t mean that’s why she got the job.

The maitre’ D showed them to a little table at the back of the restaurant which offered just the right amount of privacy.

“Well let you know when we have decided what to order. Me and my daughter have some things to discuss.” On a second thought, Jonathon Harding ordered a bottle of champagne.

(GEE, THIS DIALOGUE REALLY FLOWS SO NATURALLY. NOT!)

“Daddy, what’s all this for?” Rosanna was curious. Her father had been out of town for nearly three weeks and he looked like he had something important on his mind.

“Oh, am I keeping you from something? A hot date perhaps?”

“No, nothing like that, I’m just surprised that you have some time to spend with your hard working daughter.”

(I THINK I’M TRYING FOR SARCASM HERE. IT’S NOT ENTIRELY CLEAR.)

Jonathon’s eyes were twinkling. “That’s too bad sweetie. Id like some grandkids before you reach your time of life you know.

(OH BOY)

“Hah, hah, very funny. I still have quite a few years before that will happen thank you very much.”

(LET’S SKIP FORWARD THROUGH THIS SPARKLING CONVO TO GET TO THE POINT)

“Tell me, what’s this champagne for?”

“Alright kiddo, I’ll tell you.” his eyes were set on her with an inner intensity he was well known for. It was as if he could see right through the person he was talking to. “We have just received a story, a very intense story, for next month’s issue. It’s very controversial and I think very good. Would you like to know what the story is going to be about?”

“Well of course I would.” She leaned back in the plushy upholstered chair. “Fire away.”

“A fur trapping.” Jonathan looked triumphant. “What do you think? Our lucky photojournalist gets to spend an entire week out in the middle of nowhere with a big brute of a country man. A whole week.”

(SWEET LORD)

Rosanna was laughing. Image an entire week in the wilderness. It seemed impossible to her since she was born and raised in the city and was very proud of that fact. “Oh really,” she managed to say. “And who is this lucky writer?”

(OH I HAVE NO IDEA. WHOMEVER COULD IT BE?)

“Just guess.”

“Oh, I don’t know, maybe Joe from the editorial staff. He seems like a real country boy.”

“Nope, not him.”

“Then maybe Ed or Dave.”

“Nope.”

“Oh come on Daddy. Tell me. I can’t wait to rub it in.” She picked up her champagne glass getting ready to toast the sucker.

“You, my dear.” Jonathan was smiling broadly. “I thought you might enjoy the challenge instead of sitting around the office writing boring little fashion tips. really, you didn’t go to school for 5 years not to be challenged, did you.”

**

Dude. That was rough. I remember thinking this was such an amazing idea. It’s great to see this, though. I makes me feel heaps more sympathetic toward those whose work I read which is lacking that spark. If the drive is there and the willingness to learn and grow, then the sky really is the limit.

30 Days of Demons continues Monday when the amazing Jackie Kessler will be stopping by for the demon Q&A and she’s giving away a signed copy of Hell’s Belles

Till then, happy reading!

—Michelle xoxo

11 comments to “30 Days of Demons – Day 15 – Miscellany”

  1. Jill Myles
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 11:39 am · Link

    Bwahahaa. Sorry. This reminds me of, well, ME. Far too much.



  2. Laura
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 11:39 am · Link

    Looks like you had a redesign on the site and blog. It’s wonky looking. I use Google Chrome. I see your pony tail girl graphic for about a second before it disappears into the background. Also, the title of your post is stuck behind a graphic of your name. If you paid someone for this they need to check things over.

    Thank you for posting your old story. I’ve only read your polished books. Could not imagine your writing being less than great and polished. Makes me feel I could work and climb up on that pedestal too. I’ve been feeling pretty down about my own writing and thought I would just stick to non-fiction. I love writing the para-fiction though. Never stop getting ideas for characters and plots.



  3. linzReads
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 11:39 am · Link

    Congrats on being a finalist! You 100% deserve it.



  4. Michelle Rowen
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 11:48 am · Link

    Laura… the site’s been the same for a couple of years now. I need to update my wordpress. Hopefully that will make a difference. If not, I’ll have to contact my designer and do some trouble shooting.



  5. Michelle Rowen
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 12:01 pm · Link

    Okay, I updated my WP and downloaded google chrome. Looks fine to me! Hopefully this fixed any issues. :)



  6. Jessica W
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 6:36 pm · Link

    Well, I have to say… It’s nice to know that not all authors are born with perfect writing skills. ;)

    Thank you very much Michelle for sharing your ‘earlier’ work with us. I enjoyed.

    Oh, and CONGRATS on being a finalist. I’m sure its well deserved. :)



  7. Stacy Stew.
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 8:53 pm · Link

    Congrats on being a semi-finalist. I love your books.



  8. Tori
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 10:58 pm · Link

    First of all…congrats on being a finalist! You have been working so hard these last few years. YOU DESERVE THIS! And I am not just saying this. Writing four books a year? For that right there…you inspire me! Seriously.

    Thank you so much for showing your early works to us. I have stuff just like that laying around, and have already noticed a huge improvement in my own work. It is exciting to think that if I just keep trying maybe I too could become published.

    I’m curious. How many rejections did you get before finally getting an agent Michelle? I know that for every writer this is different…but you see, I have been putting off sending out my work because I don’t know what to expect. Sure, I know I will get rejected…but I have no idea HOW many rejections I am likely to recieve, and that bugs me.

    Thank you again for showing your work! I know now I cannot give up!



  9. Michelle Rowen
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     · April 17th, 2010 at 11:17 pm · Link

    Tori… I didn’t get all that many rejections. It took me a long time to get going, but once I did and I committed to the process, everything fell into place for me very easily. I can say that I’ve been rejected more as a published author (with proposals that will never see the light of day) than I did before I was published. I received two rejections from agents before I found my current agent of five years, and one of those was a few years prior on another project. I do know very successful authors who have dozens and dozens of rejections. So it all depends, really. And a rejection definitely doesn’t mean that your writing isn’t worthy — much like one bad review doesn’t mean that the book sucks. It’s simply one person’s opinion. The only way you can guarantee never being published is not not try or to give up after a couple of rejections. You have to get rejections to get anywhere. It’s a rite of passage. And the sooner you start racking them up, the closer you’ll be to the finish line!



  10. Tori
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     · April 18th, 2010 at 12:41 am · Link

    Thank you for taking the time to answer my question Michelle. It is much appreciated. And I’ll be honest and say I know I need to send my work out, because that’s the only way I’ll get a answer. I guess I am just scared of failing? But if I ever want to get anywhere with writing I need to get over that. Thanks for giving me that push to move on and just do it!



  11. ash'o
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     · April 18th, 2010 at 12:47 am · Link

    Thanks Michelle for sharing your earlier work.I can’t wait for Nightshade (hurry up 2011, I’m dying to read it) But I got rest of your books to look forward to read.

    Your rock.

    Just one more thing I must say, congrats on being a finalist. You totally deserved it :)



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